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Assignment 11 B

Assignment 11 B

Q The Prompt: For this assignment you will need to reference the Dept. of Corrections report utilized in the previous module. After reviewing the report, I want you to rewrite the report utilizing the concepts we have discussed so far. The Requirements: You may upload your submission as a Word document or type it into Canvass. The Grading: This assignment is worth 30 points. You can download the report here: scan0002 12.pdf Download scan0002 12.pdf Rubric Writing Intensive 30 Point Rubric Writing Intensive 30 Point Rubric Criteria Ratings Pts This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeAmount of Information 10 pts Grade: A There is an excellent amount of information and detail provided. The reader has all the facts and details necessary to understand what is being discussed. 9 pts Grade: B There is a good amount of information included in the narrative. While more details and information would be helpful, the reader still understands what is being discussed. 7 pts Grade C There is an acceptable amount of detail and information contained within the narrative; however, more detail and information would be helpful to the reader. 6 pts Grade D Only a cursory amount of detail and information is provided with virtually no elaboration. The reader will have difficulty understanding what is being discussed in the narrative. 5 pts Grade F Virtually no information or details are provided within the narrative. It is extremely difficult for the reader to understand what is being discussed. 0 pts No Marks The submission was late or was not submitted. 10 pts This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeGrammar and Punctuation 10 pts Grade A There are virtually no grammatical or punctuation errors. 9 pts Grade B There are 1-3 minor grammatical or punctuation errors. 7 pts Grade: C There are several grammatical/punctuation errors within the narrative that effect the reader's ability to comprehend the information discussed. 6 pts Grade: D There are a multitude of grammatical or punctuation errors within the document. Because of these errors it is somewhat difficult for the reader to comprehend what is being discussed. 5 pts Grade: F There are a plethora of grammatical/punctuation errors in the narrative and it is difficult for the reader to comprehend the material being discussed. 0 pts No Marks The submission was late or was not submitted. 10 pts This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeNarrative cohesion and structure 10 pts Grade: A The narrative is written in a logical, cohesive manner utilizing a proper paragraph structure that is easy for the reader to comprehend. 9 pts Grade B The narrative is written in a logical and cohesive manner and paragraph structure with very few comprehension issues. The learner is able to understand what the narrative is discussing. 7 pts Grade: C The narrative is somewhat lacking a logical and cohesive structure making it somewhat difficult for the reader to comprehend. 6 pts Grade: D The narrative is lacking in cohesiveness and structure which makes it difficult to understand. 5 pts Grade: F The narrative has virtually no cohesion or structure and is extremely difficult for the reader to comprehend the information being discussed. 0 pts No Marks The submission was late or was not submitted. 10 pts Total Points: 30 PreviousNext

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